New comments

Hey everybody!

I’ve written some comments on your Draft pages (even though the idea was that your partners give you some advice). Keep in mind that this is a collaborative work guys, you are working in a group for a reason (to help each others).

So, read my comments and post a new edited paragraph. If you have any questions, please let me know.

Miss Lizbeth is also helping out in this process 😉

 

See you in class,

Luisa.